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adoptedwriter ([personal profile] adoptedwriter) wrote2021-11-05 07:44 am

Idol, Week 2: Lake Lost

 Lake Lost

 

Crooked Lake

Boat wake

Long white dock

Geese flock

Wavelets tap

Calm lap

Rocky shore

Skiff’s moor

Petoskey stone

Sits alone

Windy now

Reeds bow

Empty chair

Willows bare 

Chris-craft

Fore and aft

Varnished sleek

Never weak

Shining sun

Days of fun
Summer breeze
memories

Lost in time

No longer mine

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[personal profile] murielle 2021-11-08 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah! Right there! From the first line. I love that it takes me right into the heart of the place and the time and the feeling. Yes!