Idol, Week 2: Lake Lost

[adoptedwriter]

 Lake Lost

 

Crooked Lake

Boat wake

Long white dock

Geese flock

Wavelets tap

Calm lap

Rocky shore

Skiff’s moor

Petoskey stone

Sits alone

Windy now

Reeds bow

Empty chair

Willows bare 

Chris-craft

Fore and aft

Varnished sleek

Never weak

Shining sun

Days of fun
Summer breeze
memories

Lost in time

No longer mine

Comments

[gunwithoutmusic]

Wow, I liked this :) I love to see when people do poetry in Idol because everyone does things so differently and it's cool to see the style here. I like the way this reads the way that memories sometimes feel, like little flashes in your mind.

[adoptedwriter]

Thanks..yep…the memory flashes…that’s what I was going for.