Sunshine Challenge, Prompt 1: Red

[adoptedwriter]

 Red:

 

Rouge, rojo, garnet,

carmine, crimson or scarlet  

I adore red and all of its heat

just think of delicious things to eat:

lollipop stains on your lips and your tongue

sticky yet comforting when I was young

radishes, beets rare tenderloin meats 

cherries and strawberries, glorious treats

sweet, sour, tangy or cinnamon spice

Red jolly ranchers are ever so nice.

My very first bike, with streamers and a bell

and a USA flag sticker on the fender as well

Red that sparkles, now there’s a bonus

The ruby red slippers were Dorothy’s onus.

In 1975 and 76, the Reds beat the Sox and the Yanks

growing up with those heroes, I give much thanks

An antique child’s chair sits by my bed

It came from my uncle; he painted it red

“I want you to have this; now take it,” he said.

A remembrance now that he’s dead.

My house is red brick, sturdy and strong

protecting my family for many years long.

Red is enduring with power and might

A symbol for warmth, love, life and light

While others see danger, debt or distress

Red reminds me of many things blessed.

Comments

[bloodydemonic]

I love all the different ways you've enticed my senses with this... great job!

[adoptedwriter]

Thanks!

[enemytosleep]

This was lovely. ♥ The bike in particular stood out to me with the bell and streamers.

[adoptedwriter]

Thank you!

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[oldtoadwoman]

I love the rhythm of this and the uplifting tone. I have this flash of being a kid and being so amused when our tongues were dyed bright red by popsicles. Fun memories!

Re: red

[adoptedwriter]

Yes!!! Thanks!

[arias_hollow]

I really liked this! The rhymes are effective and the imagery is strong.

[bemused_writer]

Ohh, love how descriptive this is. This was my favorite part: "My very first bike, with streamers and a bell and a USA flag sticker on the fender as well." Thanks for sharing!