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Alyce Wilson ([personal profile] alycewilson) wrote in [personal profile] adoptedwriter 2020-11-15 01:37 am (UTC)

I love how you used the voice to create a real sense of the narrator and what his specific character and needs might be. He definitely seems to be on the spectrum.

I also thought it was brilliant how you incorporated so many elements from the original Survivor challenge.

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